Your poem reminds me of a old puppet on a set of strings. Your 2nd and 3rd line gave me this image. I like your poem because it has complex vocabulary, along with the concept of questioning the laws of time. Overall, your poem is pretty nice!
Your poem reminds me of a old puppet on a set of strings. Your 2nd and 3rd line gave me this image. I like your poem because it has complex vocabulary, along with the concept of questioning the laws of time.
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